One way ticket to Mars

We have three friends. We have plane to world tour. She go miss kavya, miss sonam, miss kirti she go world tour. Miss kavya Restaurant she is brake fast morning time miss kavya she looks person forgot the bag. Miss kavya running tell me mister you are forgot bag.mister not listen voice  miss kavya searching the bag. But not address show but golden ticket here inside the bag miss kavya tell me friends please going to this place. But friends to tell me my plan to other places. Miss kavya I will Responsibility I will give a bag this person. 
Miss kavya next day  going to NASA place she is come. Guard give me a ticket. But miss show the golden ticket. Miss standing corner she look to person.  Person have come. Miss kavya going. Hello sir I'm kavya yesterday your forget the bag. Please keep your bag. Mister I am kabir I am scientists. Sorry yesterday I have ignoring because I was urgently going to meeting. Thank you miss kavya. I will give you are chanse please you are go to Mars and enjoy. Miss kavya thank you give a chance. Miss kavya look outside friends have come this place. But inside because she not a golden ticket Mars. Miss kavya this is my dream I have go to Mars.  Miss kavya thank you so much. 
She is come friends jealous. But she understand to any person forgot the bag. I Responsibility this bag kept and next day I will give. 

Comments

  1. Punctuation mark should be in the last.
    Capitalise word.

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  2. Story seems very good but, only some errors are there which are sentence structure and resolution is very easy

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  3. I really liked the story and the characters, however need to focus on grammar as well.

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