Aabra ka Dabra 2

1 Shanuu is  young boy- he magic boy-but he not show friends-but he help poor people. but he forgot enemy  teacher she is com in London Arbi is enemy he is all world search where is  Shanuu 

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  1. Dipali AgarwalNovember 24, 2020 at 7:43 PM

    You have written exposition, inciting incident can be more, Falling action is missing.

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  2. UnknownNovember 25, 2020 at 7:10 PM

    Structure is not proper.

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